edit this essay for me?

Monday, May 31st, 2010

i need to write a memoir with details that appeal to the five senses? anyone wanna help me include a few sensory details or edit my grammar? My first Christmas memory was the early morning of Christmas in 1998. It was cold and the weather was dry. My lips were as dry as a towel [...]

Is this a good essay? It’s about my hatred of fathers.?

Sunday, May 30th, 2010

My hate for fathers extends as far back as I can remember, with my own father. I was supposed to have a good father at the very least. Except mine turned out to be a hippie, a womanizer, broke, and condescending. My mother and he separated when I was one. The next male figure in [...]

help me edit my essay please?

Sunday, May 23rd, 2010

i need some sensory details in this thing, 1 for each senses… anyone wanna give me some ideas for the sensory details? My first Christmas memory was the early morning of Christmas in 1998. It was cold and the weather was dry. My lips were as dry as a towel and I was capable of [...]