Hypnotizing People

Okay, I’m 14-years-old and I’m going to write a novel (for funzies). So I was thinking about this plot line:

The thyme for this book will be emotion isolation (between Cora and the world), sexual tension (Cora and Jason) and the blurred line between good and evil (Mutants vs Agency).

Lonely 13-year-old Cora Hudgens discovers that she has the ability to produce electricity through her skin thus shocking anyone who touches her. At first she is excited about her new found power; she tries to use this ‘power’ for good and live up to her “superhero” fantasy. However, she soon discovers that she can only use the gift to harm people instead of help them. Thinking herself a freak, she runs away from home (she lives with her dad). She first meets Jason playing his guitar on the street for money, where she flips a coin in and he winks at her. At night Cora sets alight a small bonfire in an alley to keep herself warm using her electric touch. Just then she finds herself being shot at by a pair a shady men who happened to see her starting the fire with her touch. However, she escapes with the help of a boy called Jason West who she later befriends and then falls for.
Jason is a Clairvoyant; he can tell anything about a person/ place/ object just by smelling or tasting it. Cora refuses to share much about herself to Jason; she still cannot be sure to trust him. He is desperate to get close enough to kiss (“taste”) her so he can know everything, even though that if he does he will be shocked by her touch. He also helps Cora develop her power into full Pyrokinesis.
He tells her that the men that attacked them are part of a secret government agency specially trained in eliminating all people with telekinetic or telepathic abilities like Cora and Jason. The secret agency claim they are doing it to protect civilians and for the “greater good”, because these “mutants” are criminals (which is somewhat true, Jason is a petty thief) – but really they kill them to keep in power, as the “mutants” are the only people capable of overthrowing them. Jason leads Cora to an underground organization of fellow telepathic and telekinetic people where he promises she’ll be safe. Whilst they are traveling (by subway, they are the only two in the carriage)to get to this underground gang, they are again attacked by a telekinetic man from the Agency. However, they escape (although the train crashes) and decide it is safest if they continue the journey by foot. Once they get there she discovers that they have banded together in an attempt to destroy the government agency, and be free “permanently”. In the gang she befriends Lucy, a girl with the ability to heal anyone’s wound just with her touch. Lucy tells Cora about how The Agency have captured some more powerful mutants and hypnotized them to fight against them like the man on the train. She also learns from the leader, telepathic Owen, that her powers are “a level 5″ (very powerful) and that Jason was only bringing her here under his orders so that she could help defeat “The Agency” and thus she presumes that he does not feel the same love toward her that she feels toward him. So she runs away again, but comes back when she realizes that this is now her home and this way she can finally use her powers for a good cause….

I’ll stop there; if I decide to write it then I don’t want to give away the ending :]

It’s suppose to be for Young Adults by the way
No sh!t Sherlock
I’ve actually never seen Jumper in my life! No joke. I also don’t read x-men comics, just so you guys know that I genuinely thought this was an original.

The Dragon of
Thunder

“Jaiden… Jaiden…!” Called Kenya Jaiden’s mother, Get up you have breakfast and it’s getting cold!”. Jaiden came down stairs looking half dead his hair was out of order and his sleepy face looked that of an old man around his sixties.
“I had the best dream it was about what I could do if I ever got super powers.” Said Jaiden, “I could be getting all the girls like a super model!”
Ha! Dream on” Said Daniel, “The day you get a girl friend is the day I grow wings and fly!”
Daniel was a light skinned girl who loved a good argument she also had brown eyes and black hair. Jaiden was a Brown skinned boy with black hair brown eyes and loved to play any thing for fun or a good laugh. Jaiden’s family was a traveling family they traveled all around the United States in a mobile home spending most of the time camping or exploring.
“Jaiden betcha can’t catch me!” Daniel said while running into a near by patch of trees.
“Well you better run faster cause here I come!” Yelled Jaiden while running after Daniel. They were in the forest when Jaiden saw a faint light from under some leaves and twigs.
“Daniel look there’s something here.” Called Jaiden, “It looks cool I’ll pick it up and show it to you.” “AAAAAAAH!” Yelled Jaiden.
“Jaiden… Jaiden where are you?” Yelled Daniel nervously.
Daniel searched franticly until she found him laying on the ground. Jaiden managed to say “j… just take me home I’m
in gr… great pain. He then fainted.

Chapter 2
The Power Of The Thunder Dragon

Jaiden awoke slowly but he felt normal
as if nothing had ever happened, but he knew that something about him was different. At breakfast he had gotten over excited because his mother prepared a special meal for him. He sat down and suddenly jolts of electricity whipped from all five of his fingers and had hit the table.
The table was shaking and began to burn. It
seemed like the more he concentrated on the table the bigger the electricity beam got.
He started to get scared and closed his eyes and thought stop. The electricity beam stopped. The second the electricity stopped he knew somehow he gained something powerful. His mother knew what he had was a result of the object he had picked up in the forest.
When she was a little girl she saw a comet that looked like a orb or ball of light she was hypnotizes by the weird light that it made.
“It looks exactly the same.” Whispered Kenya as if in a trance.
“What?!” asked Jaiden alarmed by his mom’s remark.
Kenya snapped out of the trance and told him about the comet she saw. Then told him something else something that made him excited and worried at the same time.
“I saw that comet and saw how it moved as if controlled by something.” Said Jaiden’s mom, “that stream of electricity that came out of your hand gave out the same light as the comet. I know that I wasn’t the only person to see that comet people probably know more about it than me so I think we should find out more about your new…. Umm ability.”
“Yea maybe there is more to this power than we think.” Said Daniel.
“Maybe we should go to a library in the next town to look for more information.” Said Jaiden.
When they arrived at the next town they went strait to the library. They looked every where they could think of until Daniel said, “You know something like this the government should have investigated.
Maybe we should look in the declassified section.”
“Good idea!” said Jaiden
They went to the declassified section and found a book that read, “Suspicious Comets” in the book they found a great group of discredited myths about comets that is where they found the article about the Blue Star Comet or B.T.R. It read “ This comet was believed to give special powers of electricity and the ability to transform into a normal sized dragon not much bigger than the human that transformed into it.
This article was written by Trayvone M Mathis he was believed to be the original Thunder Dragon until he died in 1984. It is also said that he formed all his powers into a comet and sent it around the world his powers would then land on earth near a person that was tough enough to fight evil but nice enough to help anybody in need.

Chapter 3: The Attack

“Wow!” Said Jaiden in surprise.
“ We have to train now!” said Jaiden’s Mom
“A power like this couldn’t have just started on earth there has to be more than just humans tracking down this power.
Kenya didn’t know how right she was.
Five days from the discovery of the power
of the Thunder Dragon Jaiden had mastered shooting electric bolts but he didn’t know how to transform or do any heavy electric attacks. Kenya had almost finished making the training coarse when a strange red light came blasting toward her.
“Jaiden” called Daniel, “come see this”
Jaiden came running out of the mobile home looking shocked at the red creature
walking toward her.
“Where is the Thunder Dragon?” Demanded the red creature.
“W-what are you talking about” said Kenya.
“Don’t play dumb you ingrate Where is he!” Said the red creature
“leave her alone!” Said Jaiden,
“I’m right here”
“So you are the weakling that got the powers.” Said the red creature, “I’ll take care of you easy”
Jaiden swung at the creature but it dodged it and kicked Jaiden over Jaiden quickly remembered the power he had
and sent as many bolts of electricity towards the creature as he could. The bolts hit the creature and it suddenly started to shake but Jaiden could feel the bolts getting weaker, and concentrated hard on controlling the electricity. Suddenly the electricity shined blue than yellow and flew back at Jaiden. He felt his body change and thought, I transformed if I concentrate I can form the electricity into any form of power.
Jaiden then put his hands together and said, “Destruction blast” a ball of electricity formed and he sent it toward the creature.
The creature was hit seconds before he said, “This isn’t over there are many other aliens in the universe that are hunting for that power!”
“W-what just happened?” asked Daniel
“I figured it out I can control it I can control it!” Yelled Jaiden
“Don’t get so happy you heard what that alien said.” said Kenya.
“Why?” said Jaiden
“Because if what that alien said was true were in trouble.” said Kenya
“Okay okay so you’re saying that we are in danger of getting killed by some weird aliens!” Said Daniel in surprise.
“Yes, and now we have to train no exceptions!” said Kenya. Soon Kenya began to act like a drill sergeant making Jaiden practice his destructo-ball while she and Daniel learned how to handle spears and other common weapons. After a few days of training they were tiered and weak from constantly training.
“We have to think of something that isn’t so tiring”, said Daniel
“Yah”, said Jaiden
“Well okay I guess we could take a break from training for just a few days or maybe a week but remember the next time we face an alien there won’t be time to take a break.” said Kenya

Chapter 4: The First heist

“Hey, now that we’re finally leaving this hot
country side maybe I should have some fun with my powers.” Said Jaiden
“Hold up I don’t think momma would let us do that.” Said Daniel
“Your such a kill joy I’m gonna go have some fun your either in or out?” Said
Jaiden
“ ahh, Fine I’m in what are we gonna do though.” Asked Daniel
“We are going to play with a few country side houses.” Said Jaiden
Jaiden sneaked out of the Mobil Home and walked to a phone line he thought electric phone sure enough a string of energy went from his finger to the telephone
pole in front of him. He put his finger up to his ear he began to hear a conversation.
“Hold on now we can’t just rob the bank we have to have a plan”
“but, if we don’t get this done tomorrow
just think the boss will have are heads!”
“Okay then listen up here is the plan
we drive up to the bank at exactly 3:00 P.M.
I’ll be in a red pick up truck just blink your light twice when you see me after that we both walk out of are cars and into the Bank.
After that just follow my lead. NO SCREW UPS!!”
Hold up what bank is it that we’re robbing.”
“Haven’t you been listening at all you numb scull it’s the only one in town on 1784
Piton St.
Click.
Hang up thought Jaiden “I-I can’t believe it they just gave me every little detail about their little heist I can’t wait to see their faces when I tell the cops, Wait why tell the cops when I can stop them myself yah all I gotta do is get my mom to go to the bank!”

i need to write a memoir with details that appeal to the five senses?

anyone wanna help me include a few sensory details or edit my grammar?

My first Christmas memory was the early morning of Christmas in 1998. It was cold and the weather was dry. My lips were as dry as a towel and I was capable of tasting the blood when I rubbed my tongue against my lips. I layed on my bed with my brother by my side. I stayed up all night waiting for Santa Clause to put down my present on my Christmas stocking, but after hours of waiting not a shadow have moved.
I had tried multiple times on other Christmas to catch Santa Clause, but I always got too tired and fell asleep. On the Christmas of 1996, I found out from my parents that it was Santa Clause that climbs into people’s houses and give presents to kids that have been good. After knowing this, lots of questions popped in to my mind. How does he find out if I have been good or not? How does he know what presents I want when I only gave my Christmas wish lists to my parents? The next year, I decided to stay up to wait for Santa Clause. I tried a lot of methods to stay awake. Slapping myself on the face is the most memorable one because it is the dumbest thing I have ever done.
This time, I have learned a way to stay up without slapping myself. I drank a lot of my mother’s coffee before I went to sleep. The coffee made me hyper and energetic so I was able to stay awake. I never noticed how scary the house looked at night. The street lights reflected the shadow of a tree through my bedroom window. The shadow looked like a demon with evil claws attacking the wall. I closed my eyes to get the scary images out of my mind, but the caffeine from the coffee would not let me. I wished the sun could rise to the sky and cover the scary darkness of the nights with the bright sunlight of the day.
After a few hours, I could hear the birds singing to each other. The sun started to rise slowly and the demons on my walls began to fade away. I was glad that the darkness has disappeared, but I was disappointed that I didn’t get to see Santa Clause and ask him my questions. The effect of the caffeine was getting weak and my eyes lid became as heavy as a boulder. Just as I closed my eyes and tried to sleep, I heard a weak chatter outside the living room. I jumped off the bed and dashed for the living room with the anticipation to meet Santa Clause. If a fly got in my way, it would be crushed because I was running at full force.
When I arrived by our mini Christmas tree, I was really confused because I saw my parents holding my presents. I went up to ask them what was going on. They looked nervous and started whispering in each other’s ears. My father picked me up, held me in his arm, and told me that Santa Clause came earlier to hand them the presents. I looked around, but I did not see Santa Clause anywhere, so I asked my parents where he went. They whispered in each other’s ears again. My father, carrying me, began to head for my bed room while my mother tried to hypnotize me by constantly saying it is just a dream. I was not the smartest kid on the block but I was smart enough to know that it was not a dream.

Ok, I’ve started to write a story.I’m thinking it’s going to be 365 pages, one for each day. Each day will have a feeling or word. Here’s an example of what I wrote the other day.

His lips curled upward in a cocky manner. “You’re gonna come” She looked up, her green eyes glowing with amusement. “Maybe” The corners of his eyes crinkled yet his demeanor was serious. “Not maybe, we need you there. You will go.” he exclaimed giving her one last hypnotizing look. She smiled contentedly and clicked her tongue. “Sure” Grabbing her plaid backpacks leather strap carefully she secretly congratulated herself. His tanned skin, mesmerizing eyes, and perfectly M-shaped lips caused most girls to lose all senses (including their minds), but she had survived. The few words from their conversation played through her head like a never ending tape.” We need you, we need you” A new feeling surged through her veins like water breaking from a dam. Belonging.

See how I made it about belonging? That’s how I want each day to be. With a theme.

And I need your help because it had always interested me to have someone helping me write. I think it would be amazing to have someone to learn from and help you get better. Also with two people it would be really interesting to have their different writings.
So, if you are interested in helping me write this, or you have an idea you want please email me at-
meganpopps@yahoo.com

Thank you so much! ;D
It doesn’t matter how good you are, maybe if you want to help, write something and emial it to me so I can choose who I’d like to have help.

Thanks again!

My hate for fathers extends as far back as I can remember, with my own father. I was supposed to have a good father at the very least. Except mine turned out to be a hippie, a womanizer, broke, and condescending. My mother and he separated when I was one. The next male figure in my life was my step dad, an abusive man whose relationship with my mother ended when he was whisked off to jail. Next came another abusive stepfather who ran off delusional and psychotic when my mother and he separated. Fathers are the scum of this earth, the disciplinarians, the superiors of mothers. Fathers serve no purpose other than creating us. They are here only to use us, abuse us.

Fathers, stepfathers, I hate them all. I hate the way they try to discipline you when they feel you are misbehaving. I hate the way they have so much power in the household. The way they say “Come here. Now.” and you are forced to obey. I hate the way they fight with mothers about the way you act, talk, and dress. Fathers, people who are hypnotizing to women who fall under their gaze and carefully plan how to take control. Mothers, weak codependent people who need someone to tell them what to do.

Fathers and stepfathers don’t know about girls. They believe we are inferior, things that do as they wish, listen to them, and respect their choices. But when fathers don ’t respect our existing relationships, when they don’t listen to us, when they attempt to control us, we don’t listen. It is easy to blank them out, pretend they aren’t there, but when they are yelling, screaming, they come back and it becomes a thousand times worse than the last time they broke their way into my thoughts.

It’s easy to bring out the coldness in fathers. It’s easy to make them mad enough to hit, kick, or bite. You can use that against them in arguments, because it’s proof they are out to get us. But then our argument turns around on us and we are blamed because our mothers side with the father or stepfather. Mothers say, “Why cant you make life easy, learn to obey your father, don’t speak out, don’t talk back…” We don’t because life can’t be easy with them in it. We will fight until one of us leaves. When we aren’t old enough to leave, life doesn’t matter anymore, and fighting becomes a habit, a normal part of the day.

I hate fathers because they cheat. I hate them because they are alcoholics, I hate them because they call their children and they tell them they love them, but they never come see us. Their words are empty, their voices blank as they attempt to assure themselves and you how much they love and miss you. A father’s words are meaningless; things to fill in the silence both of you know exists. They are liars and manipulators, they only want control, Fathers want to control you, see you suffer, see the tears running down your cheeks. Fathers laugh, they don’t care about your emotions or feelings.
It becomes a game, see how many times your mom cries, and your stepfather screams and says, “Now you’ve made your mom cry, look what you’ve done, don’t you feel bad?” I begin to cry too, but it is only an act to make him feel bad, another coping mechanism I have developed. Inside I hope she will realize it’s not me, it’s him.

I dream, I read, but the fathers I know don’t fit into the fairytales. They are not good-looking, loving, and they don’t sweep my mom off her feet and carry her into the sunset. They come into my house for one reason, control. Fathers want to control me, exercise their disciplinary powers, confirm their cruelness.

All fathers are pointless, designed to create and then disintegrate. All fathers are liars. All fathers don’t truly care about their children. Some fathers have extramarital affairs and tell their children they have a sister or two ten years later. Some fathers are alcoholics. Some fathers are womanizers. But all fathers are manipulative control freaks who like to use their superior power on girls like me.
I’m not a troll.
I’m asking if you think my essay for one of my classes is good.
That is not trolling.

HYPNOTISM – The Whys and Wherefores of This Fascinating Science, from Its Ancient Origins to Its Modern Practice

I’ve been having some trouble with my story but i wanted some opinions on this… these aren’t all the details but it’s the basic plot line…
Alexis Cooper (13) has a big family, 2 brothers, Callum (18) and Leo (12) and 3 sisters, Lynette (16), Daisy (14) and Lily (10). And a mom (Mary-Anne, 47) and a dad (Phillip, 48), Phillip Cooper is very well known, almost famous, as well as all the family. Some people are out to get Phillip. A man called Taylor is the most out to get him, and he threatens at the beginning of the book to do this through his family. But they try to put this out of their minds… the 3 oldest (Callum, Lynette and Daisy) all go to a school that none of the other siblings know much about, only that; they will all go when they turn 13. Alexis is turning 13, and she is told the secret: the school is a school for super natural beings, they include, Mermaids, Werewolves, Vampires (keep reading, its not like twilight!), Ghosts, witches/wizards and transfis [TRAN-s-f-i-s] (I made up these, they are creatures who can talk to animals, they can change into animals (everyone has their own animals, like Alexis’ animal is a starling)) but all the creatures are slightly different to what we would think. Vampires can drink blood but don’t need it to survive, they also have amazing healing powers, as in they can heal others in an instant. They take a potion to stop the sun burning them to a crisp. Werewolves can change into dogs when ever they want, and they all have their own breed. Mere people only grow a tail when they touch water, and they can hypnotize people because of their beautiful looks, like sirens. Witches/wizards are born with magic inside them which they learn to control through their fingers. Ghosts are people who have died and are the few who have been given a 2nd chance, they can go invisible and walk through walls but they can also be solid and they age, they only ‘move on’ when they choose. Also some creatures have ‘Special Gifts’ such as making time speed up or slow down on one specific object (e.g. Flower, hair) or control the weather in small minor cases. Callum is a werewolves, his breed is, Dalmatian, Lynette is a Ghost she died in a car crash aged 8, her parents didn’t get the 2nd chance, and Daisy is a mermaid she has a ‘Special gift’ she do the whole speed up time thing! Alexis finds she is a Transfi, but when she gets to school she finds she is really bad at it! She can only talk to mice; she makes a best friend called Lavender who’s a mouse. She also befriends a boy called Robert Bright (13, ghost, he died when saving his sister from drowning but he was given the 2nd chance as he was the strongest and had the most potential but he can never forget himself for being alive when she’s dead) and Tessa Rosebud (13, transfi, animals = cat. She is slightly eccentric and weird but her hearts in the right place! She has a Special gift = change her appearance (e.g. hair turns blue ext) she can also do the same to others). Anyway, she meets a girl called Carmen Oliver but she doesn’t know her very well, she’s just nice! She can take the form of any person she chooses, she finds Alexis easiest (either this or maybe instead she just looks very, very much like her but can’t change her form…I’m not sure yet!). One day Alexis is walking by herself when she hears a scream, she runs towards it and finds Carmen lying dead in the floor. She doesn’t know it yet but it was Taylor trying to get to her but when he realized it wasn’t her and he was kidnapping the wrong girl he kills her. Lots of stuff happens at school after that but mostly mourning for Carmen. Alexis arranges to meet her family in the local village, when she does its just her mom, dad and Lily. She takes Lily to the sweetshop while her mom and dad go to have a drink. Taylor gets to them and takes Lily. Alexis goes after him. I’m really not sure what should happen here…I think Taylor will be a vampire and Lily will discover that she has a special gift she didn’t know about, she can make a room go into complete darkness or light, in pure fear she glows really really bright and it burns him to a crisp. Then most is happy, I’m not sure exactly how to end it … suggestion?
Thanks a bunch!
xx
lily makes the light out of fright, like she suddenly just does it out of instinct!

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Okay, I’ve never played the game, but I’ve spent a slightly absurd amount of time looking up the story online (it just fascinates me). I have also seen Advent Children. I am now going to make a number of other people watch it (don’t hate me, I think they’ll like it), but none of them have played the original game either. So I need to explain the story to them – all the histories and everything.
So, my question is…
Is the following plot summary a) understandable and b) accurate? (Yes, it is intended to include Crisis Core, and tell events in a linear fashion rather than the manner you’d learn them in the game. And the people I’m making watch have played Kingdom Hearts, so they know who Cloud, Aerith, Tifa, Sephiroth, and Yuffie are, sorta).

Summary:
In this world, there’s a company called Shinra. They’re using the planet’s energy, which is called Lifestream, for power. The actual story starts out with Cloud in Nibelheim. He and Tifa are old friends. Cloud goes off to join Shinra’s army, called SOLDIER, partly to impress Tifa, cause he likes her. These SOLDIERS are given special abilities. He goes off to join and eventually he gets rejected, but in the meantime he meets this guy Zack and they become friends. Zack IS a SOLDIER. Zack and Aerith are in love, by the way. Zack and Cloud also become friends with another SOLDIER, Sephiroth. *pause for companions to go ‘Ohhhhh’.* Eventually, all three of them are sent to Nibelheim to investigate some things, but Cloud is embarrassed about not getting into SOLDIER, so he goes in disguise. While there, Sephiroth discovers that he has the cells of an alien creature called Jenova stuck in him. He goes insane, and Cloud and Zack have to fight him. Sephiroth destroys the town and vanishes; the crazy scientist who made Sephiroth what he is captures Zack and Cloud and experiments on them. Several years later, Zack breaks himself and Cloud free. Cloud is comatose at this point. Zack tries to get the two of them home, but he runs into an army and fights long enough to save Cloud, but Zack dies. Horrible.
Cloud escapes, but then, because his brain is all messed up from experiments and he’s been through a lot, he goes crazy too, but not in the same way as Sephiroth. (Wow, a lot of people in this game have ISSUES). He forgets Zack ever existed and instead thinks that all the heroic things Zack did, Cloud thinks he did them. Basically, he thinks that he and Zack are the same person, but he forgets all about Aerith.
Yet more years later, Cloud joins this group of rebels called AVALANCHE. Or rather, they hire him – originally he’s only in it for the money. Tifa, his old friend (who he does remember, but he hasn’t seen her in YEARS), is part of this group. They and a bunch of other people go off to blow stuff up and Cloud gets separated and meets Aerith, who a bunch of other people are going after. He protects her and he joins up with the group. Depending on how you interpret events, he gets a crush on Aerith. They all launch another HUGE attack on Shinra, but then in the middle of it they discover that – joy – Sephiroth has come back from the dead. They all get to go chase after HIM. Along the way somebody takes Cloud out for a date – depending on how you act it can be Aerith, Tifa, or even Yuffie. (Incidentally I KNOW it can also be Barrett, but that’s just gonna start a whole other conversation. Probably nobody would care – I don’t! – but I’m just not going there). Eventually they discover that Sephiroth is trying to destroy the world so he can re-create it with himself as God. (I told you he was crazy). He’s trying to cast a spell that will do that, and to cast it he needs some magic stuff. The group tries to get it first, and they do, but then Cloud is hypnotized into handing it over. (This is cause of those weird experiments he has now forgotten all about). He also, while hypnotized, almost kills Aerith. She then, quite sensibly, leaves the group and goes off to try to save the world herself. She goes to cast a spell that will counteract Sephiroth’s evil spell, and she does, but immediately afterward Sephiroth kills her. Cloud and his friends show up just too late and they get to watch her die. The game is cruel.
So everyone is miserable. They also don’t know what about Aerith’s spell, especially because Sephiroth is holding it back somehow. They are furious, so they all go off to kill Sephiroth. It doesn’t work. Sephiroth also messes with Cloud’s head – royally – by showing them what really happened back home in Nibelheim, only not mentioning that that random guy is Cloud in disguise. Major meltdown on the part of Cloud ensues and everyone is scattered. They meet up again, eventually, and find Cloud passed out and poisoned later. Tifa stays with him to take care of him and eventually manages to fix his brain, undoing the whole thinking-he’s-Zack thing and putting back his real memories. Everyone joins up again, figures out what was going on with Aerith’s spell, and
sets off to find Sephiroth again. This time it works, they kill him, but a large chunk of the planet is destroyed before they can. The entire planet, though, is NOT destroyed. Life goes on. And this is where the movie you are about to see picks up.

So, is that right? I know I simplified things a little bit here and there – left out Shinra’s anti-world-ending plans, for example – but I wanted to be comprehensible and set up the psychological backstory and the relationships between the characters, not summarize the entire game. (That’s just what I did). And I know it’s not at all important to the Advent Children story that Zack and Aerith were together, but I love that couple, so I mentioned it.
Oh, and these two guys (Reno and Rude) were technically on Shinra’s side, but they and the ‘good guys’ didn’t really hate each other.

What are some signs that he might like me? & when you’re at it, please tell me if freckles on a girl or pretty or not hot?

(I’ll tell you about me: I’m sort of popular, but there are more popular girls. I have honey-blonde hair and freckles and my eyes are my best feature, because they look like a sea and they tend to hypnotize people. It’s weird but I love it. And no, I’m not fat.)