Hypnotizing People

I started writing a story and I’d like some advice to make it better or just your opinion on it. This is only the first chapter. I have another one written. Any sort of criticism is appreciated. There is much more to the plot than what the first chapter tells you. I’ve always been the [...]

I have had extreme social fears for a few years now. However, things started to really get insane when I started to develop this fear of talking to my closest friends in the world. They’re becoming distant and I care about them a lot, but I’m suddenly afraid of the few close friends who I [...]